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For manuscripts that need a brave look at the bones. Focuses on structure, plot holes, character development, and pacing—but skips the line-level polish. Your blueprint for revision glory.
Includes: Dev edit with margin notes and editorial review
$5.50 per 1000 words
Storm the Gates
developmental only
Your story's full quest. Includes three rounds: big-picture dev edit, line-level polish, and a final proofread/gut check. For authors ready to face the final boss—and come out publishing-ready.
Includes: Structure, pacing, character arcs, line edits, proofing, final notes.
$7 per 1000 words
Slay the Dragon
full edit
Need eyes on your first 10k? A tricky love triangle arc? A chaotic ending? This is for targeted help on a slice of your story, not the whole kingdom.
Includes: Margin notes + short feedback summary
$2 per 1000 words
Follow the Breadcrumbs
partial development
A one-time read-through with honest, overarching feedback. No in-document comments—just a clear map of what’s working, what’s wonky, and where your magic fizzles or shines.
Includes: Editorial review only
$4 per 1000 words
Read the Prophecy manuscript critique
$10 retainer fee to secure your editing slot on my calendar
initial investment
You take that feedback and revise on your end. We’ll go through up to three rounds total, repeating this process until your story sparkles like a freshly looted treasure hoard—and you’re proud to release it into the wild.
Cast Revisions
I’ll follow up with a full editorial review via your preferred communication, diving into what’s working, what could use a polish, and where the story magic shines brightest. Expect gentle critique, honest insight, and enthusiastic cheering.
Crystal Ball Report
You’ll start getting emails with my comments sprinkled throughout the doc. These are usually suggestions, not royal decrees—but each one is meant to help your story grow stronger.
Watch for Owls
Email me your manuscript (Google Doc preferred!) at FeFiFoEdit@gmail.com in 14pt font—because my glasses aren't enchanted for pixy microrunes.
Send the Scroll
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The Editing Process
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$10 retainer fee to secure your editing slot on my calendar
initial investment
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