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services i offer
developmental editor
For manuscripts that need a brave look at the bones. Focuses on structure, plot holes, character development, and pacing. Your blueprint for revision glory.
Includes: Dev edit, margin notes, editorial review
$13 per 1000 words
Storm the Gates
developmental only
Your manuscript’s full quest. For authors ready to lay unshakable groundwork. Coaching includes up to 2 magical council sessions—phone or video—where we journey through your manuscript, patch plot-holes, and forge a story that can truly stand tall. Ongoing banter in your Google Doc. Consider me your personal story side-kick, mentor, and occasional cheerleader.
Includes: Dev edit, margin notes, editorial review, and coaching interaction.
$20 per 1000 words
Slay the Dragon
full edit with coaching
Need eyes on your first 10k? A tricky love triangle arc? A chaotic ending? This is for targeted help on a slice of your story, not the whole kingdom.
Includes: Margin notes + short feedback summary
$10 per 1000 words
Follow the Breadcrumbs
partial development
A one-time read-through with honest, overarching feedback. No in-document comments—just a clear map of what’s working, what’s wonky, and where your magic fizzles or shines.
Includes: Editorial review only
$10 per 1000 words
Read the Prophecy manuscript critique
$10 retainer fee to secure your editing slot on my calendar
Every booking sprinkles a little gold into the pot for new indie authors—helping fund editing scholarships and giving fresh voices a chance to shine.
initial investment
You take that feedback and revise on your end. We’ll go through up to two rounds total, repeating this process until your story sparkles like a freshly looted treasure hoard—and you’re proud to release it into the wild.
Cast Revisions
I’ll follow up with a full editorial review via your preferred communication, diving into what’s working, what could use a polish, and where the story magic shines brightest. Expect gentle critique, honest insight, and enthusiastic cheering.
Crystal Ball Report
You’ll start getting emails with my comments sprinkled throughout the doc. These are usually suggestions, not royal decrees—but each one is meant to help your story grow stronger.
Watch for Owls
Email me your manuscript (Google Doc preferred!) at FeFiFoEdit@gmail.com in 14pt font—because my glasses aren't enchanted for pixy microrunes.
Send the Scroll
The Editing
Process
The Editing Process
how it works
$10 retainer fee to secure your editing slot on my calendar
First book and on a shoestring budget?
Hop on over and apply for a scholarship! The number of openings depends on full-service bookings, so while I can’t promise every application will be accepted, each will be taken under consideration. Everyone deserves a chance to rise!
initial investment
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